Well done!!! Very good! This time there was depth in your voice and some nice harmonics. Although after the first minute the depth and the harmonics dissapear...it's like you get tired or something. The guitarist is exceptional!! You should try to keep the same level of performance from start to end. With or without glasses...perhaps some red smaller glasses? Of course all these are my point of view and you will soon win many competitions. Also, you are very young and your performance will be better by time. I just noticed that you listened to my advice and took the opportunity to write some more. (You could also use a light compressor on the recorded vocals to give a little pump)!