You are viewing a single comment's thread from:
RE: River Drown: what do you do when the world pushes you to the wall?
You wrote this poem I assume?
It's very intense, which is very good. Nice work my friend!
Keep writing ;)
You wrote this poem I assume?
It's very intense, which is very good. Nice work my friend!
Keep writing ;)
Yeah, I did, I got inspired to write the poem after listening to a story being told by one of my friends about a certain lady he knows who ran out of the house to hide from the shame, castigation and mockery that friends and worst more-his family. The day she put to birth, the parents refused to foot the bill, even the young man that put her in the family-way bluntly denied. So she was left in shambles, hence the reason for her action. Thats just the only part I heard, the later part is act of fiction.
Thank you very much for stopping by and do well to come by for the concluding part of the poem.
Your comments make me better.
Bless you.
Sorry to hear that it partly truly happened. Unfortunately we hear a lot of heartbreaking stories like this lately.
I enjoyed your writing and explanations. And again, welcome to Steem!
Posted using Partiko iOS
@lion200, thats just what my pencil could capture, the story told verbally would make you weep. Such is life, thanks once again. I'll post the remaining part tomorrow, that's if my weak battery would permit because it's one of my temporal challenge. Thanks once again.