U r a great poet.....but sometimes I feel that the flow is breaking because of POEM TURNING INTO PROSE.......I m just trying to be honest so that u work on this thing and make uaself even better... I m not a PRO.....BUT YEAH ...I DO KNOW SOME TIT BITS IF POETRY
I like to keep my poems simple, not everyone here is English and understands complex language although I do write complex pieces from time to time
I m sorry...,..I was not criticizing you ...but jotted down what I felt was right...sorry.....
I really don't mind :) keep being honest, it helps