Alone
~
Reaching for the stars
Dancing in the light
Dreams she dares not speak off
Waterfalls covers her heavy eyes
The beauty behind the pain is decaying
Ashamed of being cold
No one sees the tears in the rain
Or appreciates stars in the day
The Night
Always new
In her world its darkness
Days are legends
A fairytale of once upon a time
She deafens to the call of the hallows
Can her Sun shine again
Hanging onto what's left of her
Fading
The curtains are closing
No one watched her show
As she morphs away from existence
~
Inspired by @hiddenblade
Model @hiddenblade
Dante is here No fear
Well penned. I love the tone of the poem--dark and rich in very fluid words that depict the emotion you're trying to express precisely.
I'm pleased that you appreciate this art
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Or appreciates stars in the day
The Night
Always new
In her world its darkness
This imageries are out of bound, I mean they leap right into my imaginations and shatters it to pieces really this is prefectly written, the verses pokes a point each and I could feel your emotions,
We should do a collaboration buddy, your poems are a beauty
Yay! Collaboration.
Of course I'm in... you know I do read your work as well.
So i believe we will blend smoothly. smoothie
Looking forward to that😃
It's amazing, I mean many don't pay attention to the details of my poem, but you do,thank you.
How about you pick a title? and let's write, you get to post it, of course, I will post mine in your discord inbox, then you can publish the two together?
You know where to find me on discord 😉
Yeah I'll message you right about now
This poetry conveys a lot of message. You got your inspirations rightly sir. Thank you for this @dante31
You are very much appreciated
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Hello @dante31
Your poems are always top notch👏👏
And you chose the right source of inspiration @hiddenblade this lady is one superb photographer on the blockchain, quality pictures that speaks so much volume.
Another poem #Alone from a Legend
Thanks for the accolades. I appreciate you 😊
Yes, she is awesome and you are awesome as well.
Hehehhee accolades to me for been awesome😉😉
Nice poetry. I feel her sadness within my soul.
Good to know you write such a wonderful poem like this.
Hey buddy, this is my art...
poetry is what I do.
Thanks
Yeah, I can see it in you. I do write poem too but not really into it.
I am so glad I was able to inspire you to write a poem. This is the greatest achievement that an artist could have..
This hits me so hard I fell. I feel like YOU are narrating my life. lol. Really, thank you so much for this beautiful poem!
You are very much welcome. This is my appreciation for such lovely art of photography. It was just too good.
I'm glad i was able to WoW! You
Wooowww... Fantastic. So dark, so emotional. I really enjoyed this.
😎😎😎
Thanks buddy...
Amazing work Dante! LOVED it!
Thanks fam