Un haiku, un'immagine - Haiku, Image [ITA/ENG]

in #poetry • 6 years ago (edited)

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Nell'acqua al sole
danza di carpe e pane -
ridono i bimbi




In sunny waters
a dance of carps and breadcrumbs -
laughter of children




世の中や蝶の暮らしも忙しき - 小林一茶

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     6 years ago 

    Beautiful image between the stones, the sea and the light, @fenix. The shoal pecks at the water like grains in the sea. Es un descenso de la mirada! Un abrazo

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     6 years ago 

    Thank you Nancy, I'm not really happy with the last verse because in Italian bimbi stands for bambini but I had to stretch it due to the 5 syllables rule.. It's always nice to read your comments 😊

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       6 years ago 

      Bimbi è ok, l'ho visto usare parecchio negli haiku italiani 😉

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         6 years ago 

        Ah.. ero molto preoccupato..

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           6 years ago 

          Bello! Ti stai superando ogni volta

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           6 years ago 

          Grazie! Mi sto appassionando.. adesso ho preso questo Marco IMG_20180605_140901.jpg

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