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RE: Un haiku, un'immagine - Haiku, Image [ITA/ENG]
Beautiful image between the stones, the sea and the light, @fenix. The shoal pecks at the water like grains in the sea. Es un descenso de la mirada! Un abrazo
Thank you Nancy, I'm not really happy with the last verse because in Italian bimbi stands for bambini but I had to stretch it due to the 5 syllables rule.. It's always nice to read your comments 😊
Bimbi è ok, l'ho visto usare parecchio negli haiku italiani 😉
Ah.. ero molto preoccupato..