Wow this is amazing, I mean your use of refrains in the verse.

Each particle a tiny heart:

Each heart, a tiny world.

This lines are intriguing I mean it gives a whole lot of thrilling poetic effect like an effort to really drive home the use of metaphor here.

As usual your use of words are amazing and this one is sharp and witty, there seem to be no metric arrangement or rhymes but rhythmically you nailed this to a standstill. It's beautiful

I miss you Dsound tracks though, It would be Heavenly to listen to this one on a sound

The best of the best you are