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RE: The Biggest Scam ( Original Poetry by DMILLIZ)
To me, this poem obviously touched an aspect to me, you know debt seems to be the only way to escape death and even when there are so many aspect as to why money is really good, this piece touches on the infamousness of money and the harsh reality behind it, awesome rhymes too buddy, this is sweet really.
It's very satirical and monologued in nature the poem is just the reality we see now, I'll be writing a version of mine just now and I'll be tagging you.
Thank man, reading your comment brings me back to the the 100 day challenge.
I always go into rhyming with my poems, I the song writing side of me always kicks in.
Yeah the reality indeed, who doesn't think its a scam is up for a money grabber, few see the bigger picture. Looking forward to your version.
Hahahaha, I'm almost done with my version, besides this piece is something people tend to not look into the deeper meaning, it's really splendid, I'll hope to see you explore your poetic side more really, it's sad we no longer have a potty community here