Guest: a poem

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)


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Here, where I’m dying, in a white
house by a blue harbor.

—Maxim Bakhdanovich
Come in, Maxim!... This is Minsk
choked under a pillow of clouds.

There’s you: a statue in a heavy coat.

Here all monuments wear coats
not wool, but linden bark coats
with bee fur collars.
In their pockets monuments keep belts.

And under collars monuments have necks.

In winter shadows insulate the walls.
Windows and cracks are plucked with shadows.

In museums on display are coats
and nooses. And water is pickle-juice.

Come in, Maxim, apartment blocks
are wrapped in ammunition staircases,
and window-medals sparkle in the night.
Every building here is a kind of bust,
an elevator ascends like vomit.

Of furniture there is a stump.

Come in, Maxim,
it’s nothing like lie dying by a harbor.
Take a sit on a stump.

Don’t cast a shadow.
Keep the coat on.

@udezee
#FutureGenesis

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Summary


Minsk is full of statues: gigantic statues to national poets along with the granite busts of communist officials. Maxim Bakhdanovich was a Belarusian modernist poet who died of tuberculosis at the age of twenty-five, a couple of years after his first book was published. He was lucky to die so peacefully. In exactly twenty years most Belarusian intellectuals were tortured and murdered by the communist officials. In one night in 1937, Bolsheviks shot twenty-two young Belarusian writers. The statue of Bakhdanovich in Minsk is 4.6 meters high and is made out of granite.”


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@udezee,

I've got to know ... how on Earth did you come up with the idea for this poem? You live in Nigeria, correct? Do tell.

In any event, your poem worked. I'm now sufficiently curious about this Maxim Bakhdanovich character that I'm going to Google him right now.

Minsk is full of statues: gigantic statues to national poets

Where's my statue? Hell, I'd be willing to settle for a $10.00 post-payout!

Udezee, how about this ... you write a poem about why I deserve a statue and I'll do the same for you. This is a good idea. Now all I need to do is come up with some words that rhyme with ... "Udezee."

Hmm. :-)

@quillfire,
Welcome back buddy, you were away for months. Yes I live in Nigeria and the Internet has made the world a small place.

I really appreciate your comment regarding my just uploaded poem.

It was actually borne out of my like for Minsk that made me write such. Expect more episode like such in my next publications.

Stay mute as I set to present a poem for you in some hours time or days.(I make no promises here regarding when, lol)

I am not doing too well in health due to exams in school and stress.
Regards,
xx~udezee

Lovely poem. I'm impressed by this creativity

Thank you so much

This is very creative.

Thank you

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