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RE: Within the Primordial Morn

in #poetry6 years ago

What a good poem has resulted from inspiration are these images, full of charm and suggestive evocations, @ d-pend.
Making an order that concatenates the writing with the image, I would say that the first stanza fits the initial image:

The man is sure that it is piscine.

The second stanza goes with the third image:

the ethereal tentacles of the blue flame.

The third stanza goes with the second image:

the eclipsed planets.

The fourth stanza corresponds to the third image:

the cerulean forest of tongues:
which ululate to the moon-pulse

The fifth stanza is reflected in the last image that is the repetition of the initial:

that shines with smoke of Burgundy, which allows the herds to knead.

The sixth stanza agrees with the fourth image:

Of the brown gulls and the bright sylphing.

What a good exercise he has left us, thanks for taking us out of the comfort zone by reading and create challenges for us.

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