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RE: 'Gold' - 100 Day Poetry Contest Day 68

This is a simple,beautiful, rhythmic and feel-good poem.

I like the way it flows effortlessly and with simple rhymes that are tome like the sound of a clear stream rolling pebbles.

This words:

Don’t believe in the
Lies You Were Told.
Don’t buy into the
Stories You Were Sold.

Are so simple, yet so powerful. The feeling is liberating, because too many people send you negative messages about yourself without even knowing you.

Also the relativity of it all, that you mention at the beginning of the poem sends another message "there's room for us all, we all deserve love".

The self-help theme of your poems is not usually my cup of tea, but this is one poem that I can and will cherish because it has great value.

Thanks for this beautiful gem.

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