The river - Day 2 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

in #steemitschoolpoetry6 years ago (edited)

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entry for Announcing the Steemit School Poetry 100 Day Challenge! (Total Prize Fund 2000 SBD)

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image source - sayee

The river

Gushing through lands
giving life to all
it does not stand still but expands
the river is a blessing to one and all

Humans are a selfish species
polluting the waters
plastics, oil and factory wastes
poisoning, it is a curse

The river sand is looted for buildings and amenities
we see it's might fall
modern life and irresponsibilities
thus affecting all

Plant more trees, stop looting the nature
save the river and save us all

©sayee

The above picture is that of the mighty Periyar river. There are illegal trades between people who help in looting the river sand. People travel in boats and take the sand from the bottom of the river in cane baskets. This sand is then sold to those who need it for building apartments and the like. The police do arrest such illegal traders but what they have done has already caused extensive damage to the river. The nearby wells are also dry and the condition will worsen during the harsh summer. Added to this is the pollution caused by factories and such.

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image source - sayee

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@sayee I am also a member of india united discord group.... Can we chat in discord?? Its urgent...

This is a sad sad issue - The water is a sacred and ancient element, a timeless spirit that makes up life and without water, nothing would be possible - yet we pollute it more and more each day.

But I have faith that in the coming decades we will develop the technology we need to clean it properly... I sincerely hope so anyway...

I am currently on Lake Atitlan in Guatemala, and I am sure it must be one of the most beautiful places in the whole world... Yet sadly the lake is badly contaminated... But there are things happening to help clear it up... I have faith we will do the work that needs to be done.

Water is life!

We gotta save her <3

Great poem and important subject to weave into it.

Great work :)

With Love
Hart Floe Poet
<3

thank you so much, don't know how I missed this comment. I am sure the lake will be cleaned up soon

I hope so :)

Romba nalla irukku @sayee. Aap ek kavi ban gayi ho ...

Please help me to register in the India United channel. I have tried many times with this .register command, but no response.

Thanks, I will mention this to @inuke

please contact @inuke in IU discord

JI haan .... Dhanyawad

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