thank you @free-reign, my poem is not positive either and it is good to talk about this openly, it starts at such a young age people being forcefully told they can not survive or succeed with out being told what to do, throw in to that picture the education system and global advertising and the media and it's a controlled nation. I tend to write a lot about this is different ways. It's such a huge deception and yet so readily accepted, it's all those years of being trained to listen and not ask questions , to submit and conform.