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RE: 100 DAYS OF POETRY: DAY 68 - The Fool’s Journey (Cont’)

in #steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years ago (edited)

You know I love you and I totally get the tarot journey you are describing but I fail to connect to this series. I read them all through and again now to pinpoint what exactly is bothering me. And I think I know now the whole thing reads like a tarot handbook, not really a poem at least that is how it feels to me. The idea is a good one I just wish it felt more personal it feels to clinical .

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     6 years ago 

    You are correctamundo. 😎 It is very clinical. I'm keeping myself out of this one. Maybe after I reach the universe I will expand to include myself.
    You actually gave me an idea. Thank you for pointing this out to me.

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