Love i feel like the poem would be stronger if you discarded the last stanza
When it looks and it sounds
very weird to stick around.
I seem to spin like candle flies
Around the fire untile (also you need to fix this it is until <3 ) I die.
Love i feel like the poem would be stronger if you discarded the last stanza
When it looks and it sounds
very weird to stick around.
I seem to spin like candle flies
Around the fire untile (also you need to fix this it is until <3 ) I die.
Thank you I just fixed the typo.
Should it be strong? 😛 I don't feel strong
:P