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RE: I Am-100 Days of Poetry Challenge: Day Sixty Five

in #steemitschoolpoetry6 years ago (edited)

I love how the lyrical voice slips in the poem between contrasts. It is evident the human essence transcending itself and accepting itself with virtues and defects to rise above appearances and achieve the ultimate goal that is "BEING". From the title itself: "I am", the affirmation is transmitted, the movement of searching for oneself, so important in these days that it is so easy to get lost with so many technological and experiential seductions.
Good job, appreciated @trucklife-family.

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thanks so much @zeleiracordero for your really encouraging feedback xx

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