Really nice job!!!! We have writing in common :)

I'm also writing a story released only for Steemit! A suggestion - at the bottom of this page (edit it before the 7 days have passed) and leave a link that says "Continue to part 2"

That way, people don't have to look through your blog :)

Then can just click the link at the bottom of the page.

Also... on part 2 - make a back link that says "Start with Part 1" and links back here.

(i'm not sure if you did that yet... but i'll go see now because I'm going to ready chapter 2!) hehehe