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RE: The Cat and The Dog (A @trumpman's original story)

in #story5 years ago

HaHaHa!!! Trumpan!!! You are now my Dreamman!

Here is my extremely valuable professional human opinion on this example of childlike creativity - analysis about the Trumpman:

..... uh .... hum ... uh ... I fear, you were a completely normal kid with completely normal emotional movements in your childlike fresh heart. Easily in the position to recognize the evil in the world, to find it stupid and then to choose a happy ending - quite simply: dog and cat become friends. Logo! What a good heart you had...... uh... I mean, you have.

Best sentence ever (!):

... The garden's dog, scared it to scare it.

Poor teacher did not get your genius.

Teacher should have written:
Dimitrios Nicholopolous, you did that really well. You've already discovered existentialism and put it in a nutshell: "Full, a roof over your head is all a creature needs to be happy. I congratulate you on this early realization. Many many people lose it in the course of their lives and keep coming up with new problems as to why they are miserable.

Bravo, the shorter the better!

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Normal? I am disappointed with myself 😭

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