You are viewing a single comment's thread from:
RE: Lisa, Donna and Catastrophe, fantasy story [end]
Great story. Very funny. Some aditional proofreading will make it easier to follow (some past tenses and subject-verb agreement were overlooked).
But it was a great premise.
The crazy things people have done with available technology!
It reminded me of some news about young kids hacking important High Sec servers.
You're right @hzlema. I'm in struggle with English. So, I have to learn the grammar.
Not a real problem, just to be clear. English is not my first language either and I have to work hard to get it right (after years studying). I admire people who, write in english with such power of imagination and creativity.
You did a great job with that story.
Keep writing