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RE: The Busy Life with Busy.org - What You Need to Know [Episode 1]

in #utopian-io6 years ago

This post is very much in line with your usual contributions: The content is good, there's editorial content enough, and even some good humor thrown in.

Much like your other posts, however, I still have issues with your use of style and grammar. As usual, I'll cite some examples:

  • "It was then it suddenly hit me" is missing a word. Specifically, the word "that" between "then" and "it."

  • "I was yet to make a contribution for Busy.org" should be "I have yet to make a contribution for Busy.org."

  • "It is quite a popular one, so popular that a number of other dApps employed Busy’s open source code in the creation of their own applications." This one should be broken up into two sentences for clarity and ease of reading, and also has an entirely redundant part: "It is quite a popular one. It is so popular, in fact, that a number of other dApps have employed Busy’s open source code."

I know how hard you work on these posts. I would strongly urge you to consider one or more of the methods I mentioned in my post on How To Write a Great Utopian Blog Post to improve your style and grammar.

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Thank you for your review, @didic!

So far this week you've reviewed 19 contributions. Keep up the good work!

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