Hello, @abasifreke!

Thank you for this contribution. Telegram is a great app, and I am glad you decided to create a blog post about the recent developments. The post is comprehensive and well-illustrated with quality screenshots.

On the content side, this was a mixed bag for me. Even though I like all the information provided, I have to admit that I wanted to see more editorial content in your review. The post contains information about some basic features, but tells the readers so little about your personal knowledge and views. Furthermore, I wish you'd gone into detail regarding the key features described in your review. There is no actual value in describing the functionality of a few simple features without sharing valuable insights about your personal experience of using those.

That said, I think that this post could have been better written. There were serious issues of style and proofreading, making some parts of your text difficult to comprehend. Moreover, I think that you should look to improve your paragraphing. Each paragraph should always focus on one central point, as this is something that makes it easier to clarify your thinking about the progression of your argument.

I look forward to your next contribution.

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