RE: (ISO) A golden opportunity to acquire enough Afit token. Learn how to purchase on steem engine and see its benefits.
Hello, @ckole!
Thank you for another nice contribution to Utopian. You have been providing quality content for a long time, and I would like to thank you for your hard work and dedication. Once again, you managed to create a very informative blog post about Actifit. Keep up the good work.
In terms of content, I like all the information provided. The post is detailed and extensive, and contains valuable insights about your personal knowledge and views. You also did a really good job in breaking down the basics of the initial Steem offering, and I think that users looking to buy some Afit with Steem will find your post very useful.
That said, the post did have issues of grammar and style, and I'd be happy to cite a few examples in a follow-up comment. Nevertheless, it was a solid overall effort, and I appreciate your commitment to the project.
I look forward to your next contribution.
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Thanks for the review. Pls cite the issues.
Hello!
I will cite a few examples for you:
This sentence should read: "The initial Steem offering is arranged to allow steemians to purchase Afit tokens with Steem."
Again, let me rephrase that: "I would like everyone to get the steps clearly, which means I will make a detailed explanation."
This sentence should read: "In order to participate in the ISO ( Initial steem offering), you need to log in to Steem engine."
I think you meant to write: "You will see that your Steem has been deposited."
I hope you will find this comment useful.
Thank you @lordneroo.
Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!