RE: (ISO) A golden opportunity to acquire enough Afit token. Learn how to purchase on steem engine and see its benefits.

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ckole (68)in #utopian-io • 5 years ago (edited)

Thanks for the review. Pls cite the issues.

5 years ago in #utopian-io by ckole (68)

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lordneroo (72) 5 years ago

Hello!

I will cite a few examples for you:

The initial Steem offering is arranged to allow steemians purchase Afit token with Steem.

This sentence should read: "The initial Steem offering is arranged to allow steemians to purchase Afit tokens with Steem."

I will like everyone to get the steps clearly which means I will make a detailed explanation.

Again, let me rephrase that: "I would like everyone to get the steps clearly, which means I will make a detailed explanation."

In other to participate in the ISO ( Initial steem offering), you need to log in to Steem engine.

This sentence should read: "In order to participate in the ISO ( Initial steem offering), you need to log in to Steem engine."

You will see that you Steem has been deposited.

I think you meant to write: "You will see that your Steem has been deposited."

I hope you will find this comment useful.

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ckole (68) 5 years ago

Thank you @lordneroo.

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