Hello!

I will cite a few examples for you:

The initial Steem offering is arranged to allow steemians purchase Afit token with Steem.

This sentence should read: "The initial Steem offering is arranged to allow steemians to purchase Afit tokens with Steem."

I will like everyone to get the steps clearly which means I will make a detailed explanation.

Again, let me rephrase that: "I would like everyone to get the steps clearly, which means I will make a detailed explanation."

In other to participate in the ISO ( Initial steem offering), you need to log in to Steem engine.

This sentence should read: "In order to participate in the ISO ( Initial steem offering), you need to log in to Steem engine."

You will see that you Steem has been deposited.

I think you meant to write: "You will see that your Steem has been deposited."

I hope you will find this comment useful.