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RE: [Tutorial]: Ionic Tutorials (Lazy Loading and How it affects performance)

in #utopian-io6 years ago (edited)

Thank you for the contribution.
So few points:

  • You refer in your code to newPage (for example newPage.module.ts), although your screenshot shows no newPage and uses instead new.module.ts and relevant variations. Your directory structure is also slightly different. Is this screenshot not yours? or how did this happen?
  • Your text formatting has some serious issues. With so many contributions on the tutorial category, I do not understand why you still face such issues.
  • Why did you include a minified version of your code instead of a standard version? and how do you define that this is minified?
  • Your code file has no extension, how come? and also you added a text string at the end, so your code cannot function out of the box:

this is how to push a new page to the stack
this.navCtrl.push('NewPage')//Must be a string

  • In the tutorial, you point users to go to a directory, while that is not even a directory.

Head to the directory below
src/app/app.module.ts

  • I do not believe you included enough details in the tutorial, and with all the confusing aspects highlighted above, it would be essential to see improvements over all those points.

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Thanks for the points

  • I would be grateful if you could expatiate on the areas where I got the text formatting wrong so I could improve on the next
  • Secondly, the code in my repo was sort of minimized so I could get all the code for the tutorial into a single file. In tutorials dealing with a single concept uploading the whole project would make it hard to find the exact files were dealing with. So I specify the file path in the tutorial and put them together in the GITHUB repo. All files are typescript files.
  • And lastly the file path stated in the last point would be easily found if the tutorial processes are being followed. The starter template includes all the folders when you run the starter command as stated at the beginning of the tutorial.
    Thanks for the review

Some examples...

Basically no real headers or proper separators.

About the github repo, no you do not need to put everything in a single file. Upload your project work, and pinpoint the files you are using, just like you did in the tutorial, but use correct file names. I still do not understand the difference in file names and structure compared to your screenshot, which is point three. Having such a difference is terribly confusing for the reader, and shows low tutorial quality content.

Thanks a lot
I'd certainly use these points when writing the next

Thank you for your review, @mcfarhat! Keep up the good work!

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