RE: Carnet - Another note taking application
Thank you for your contribution to the Carnet project. The app seems like another nice note-taking app. I like the UI, and a few of the features highlighted.
The post is extensive with information about the app uses, advantages, and your thoughts. Well done!
I appreciate the effort you put in writing, but I think there are quite a few areas where you could do better.
First, for clarity, you need to be consistent in spacing your paragraphs. Your opening section appeared stuffed with texts, and I believe it could be better than that. Also, the post had many grammars and proofreading issues. I would recommend you check properly for issues in your texts before publishing. Grammarly could have helped to spot some issues.
On your comparison section, you compared the Carnet note-taking app with a Dairy app. They are different, and they serve a different purpose. Plus, your comparison is quite confusing. You wrote Activity diary at first, and you concluded the comparison with Easy dairy. Is that intended or a mistake?
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Hello @tykee, thank you for your review.
Sorry, I forgot to space out the words in the introduction.
Yes, the Activity Dairy is a mistake and I'll fix it (alongside with the spacing at the intro).
Talking about the content, I'll do my best to make it a better quality in my next review.
I just noticed and have corrected it; I was comparing the app with Easy Dairy.
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Thank you for your review, @tykee! Keep up the good work!