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RE: CPU Info v4.2.0 - provides information about hardware and software

in #utopian-io5 years ago (edited)

Hi, and thank you for the contribution. I appreciate the effort put in explaining the uses and functions of the CPU info application.
The CPU info app is another decent project for mobile devices. I have seen a lot of contributions to this project in the past. Although, you made most of the inputs, and that made me believe you have a proper interest in the project.

Let's dive into the structure of the post. In your first five paragraphs, you made emphases that the app is essential without any other relevant points. Repetition of information in a blog post could be viewed as stuffing. Also, most of the information is about the uses and functions of the app. I can see a little personal touch, but the post does not contain unique and insightful editorial content.

Furthermore, The post had grammar and style issues. We value quality writing in the blog category, and we want our contributors to improve.

I'd be glad to cite examples and tips in a follow-up comment.

Thank you!

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Thank you for your review, @tykee! Keep up the good work!

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