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RE: Loop Habit Tracker; an app that'll create a difference in your life

in #utopian-io5 years ago

Hi Chrisbarth,

Thank you for your contribution. The Loop habit tracker seems like a simple, but efficient tracker application.

I appreciate the effort. The content is editorial with your thoughts and experiences. However, the writing could have more rounds of proofreading. Also, It appears you wrote each section of the post as a paragraph. For consistency, you could make some three or four paragraphs, depending on the phrasing. I advise that you be consistent in spacing your paragraphs.

Further, when comparing two projects, it is valuable you make it extensive with good points and visuals. Marking out a few bullets points isn't a good comparison.

Thank you!

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Hello @tykee, thanks for your review. But I'm not happy to see what's in the screenshot. I made a comparison be it big or small.

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Thank you for your review, @tykee! Keep up the good work!

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