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RE: Fatal Decision - The Weekend Freewrite -2/9/2019
It all started so normal like lives of many, even mine. Leaving everything behind and going on an adventure to a different country where you'll be all on your own.. but then..
I didn't expect it.. It thought that maybe the plane would crash or something like that but the whole airport?! That must have been a huge hurricane :) Unfortunately it was too late to realize that it was a wrong decision..
I like how slowly the story started and how quickly it developed. It became all scary in a split of a second. Well done! I wish I could write like this :)
Thank you for sharing and have a good start of the week!
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I hate sad endings myself, but in 5 minutes to write the ending, you don't have time to think, you just type and see what happens.