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RE: Penny For You
Thanks for the great comment (making my initial comment where I asked for feedback look all the more paltry and suspiciously brief).
You're definitley right about feeling the need to subvert expectations, but I think that need to show dominance is mixed/caused with/by an artistic insecurity, like any criticism is given distance by the fact "yeah well I said fuck it first so"haha. I still feel like it works here though, and I have no desire to go further rhyming thought w/ thought.