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RE: The Ghost on the Golf Course - Part One
I'm glad this post caught my eye @keithboone and I was also very happy to be reminded about how good your story telling abilities are.......and those images. Wow! They are scarily mesmerizing. I think I caught sight of part 2, so I will make my way there with a strong torch to light my way in the dark but also to fend Doris off if she gets too close.
Thank you for reading the story, Trudee. I wish I could take credit for making it all up, but alas the tale is true. I mean seriously - who could invent a ghost with a name like Doris? At least Victor has a name I can believe for a villain! But Doris? I suppose she is truly just a good girl gone bad. Very bad as it turns out! :-)
Quite frankly, I think it takes just as much skill to re-write a story as it is to write one, especially if it is well known, like this one. You've caused your readers to ask questions and that takes skill.
I know what you are saying about the name Doris. It does seem rather benign for a ghost. When I hear the name 'Doris' I think of Doris Day, the famous actress and there wasn't anything scary about her from what I can recall.
This tale needs more publicity so I gladly resteem it. Can't wait for episode 3.
Thank you so much for the resteem, Trudee! Episode three is now online ;-)
Awesome! I'll check it out now.......with caution and suspense in equal measure.