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RE: THE AWAKENING: A PIECE OF FICTION
I love to see different interpretations of what people feel/see/whatever else they do when they are about to die. Yours was very interesting to read. It's like I would be that person drowning in darkness, not knowing anything and wondering what is and what isn't knowledge. Not being sure if there is a family, or if I'm at the surgery table surrounded by surgeons. You put so much detail in your writing that it feels like you've been through such an experience already :)
I like that you keep the awakening part short as it's all about the emotions before the awakening. And I truly enjoyed your last sentence. The feeling of knowing.. and now it is how it should be.. perfect!
Thank you for sharing! It's an impressive piece of fiction!
Thank you @delishtreats. I have never had such an experience. My imagination is just warped that way.
I hope I can keep up the good work though. Hope to see you again. Thanks for stopping by.