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6 years ago in #fiction by dirge (62)
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Congratulations 👏 @dirge on your SBI win. Great story ending. 👍👍
Yours it's not a deus ex machina but a good twist for sure. You've been able to play with all the prompt's narrative elements and maintain its original pulp and rusty atmosphere. I also liked your fly on the moon metaphor and the poetry within your descriptive part. Talking about horror.. I just finished to prepare a special prompt for week #12.
I like the style of your writing, you have a good knack for words! Smiled a lot when I understood what was the probable ending: Tree getting angry against Eggman harassment and killing him, or the two killing each other.
This cracked me up!
Thanks for reading!
Week #12 is between us! Check it here and good luck, brave storyteller!