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RE: The Town That Changed - Finish The Story Week #24 Entry
Thanks agmoore! :D I had some stuff in there originally about parallels between what he’s seeing and experiences he had in the past when tripping. I had to cut it though to get the story under 500 words. Maybe I should have cut something else. :) In any case, many thanks for reading and commenting!
I don't think the piece suffers from uncertainty. Some of my favorite writers leave the reader in doubt (ETA Hoffman, Kafka, Borges).
I appreciate the feedback! Kafka's one of my favorite writers as well. WIll have to check out Hoffman and Borges!