If You See A Mangy Calico Cat...

in #freewrite5 years ago

Off and on over the past several months I have participated in one way or another with the daily five minute freewrite hosted by @mariannewest.

During that time, the daily prompts have been one word, meant to create a topic to write about, or be inserted somehow in the post. It could be the focal point, or what I prefer, just another word in the story. The more seamless it fits in, the better.

Lately, instead of one word, there have been two or more word phrases mixed in. At first, I thought this made it harder, but then I realized it was actually quite the opposite. It wasn't so much that the words always fit together, or fleshed out a story (sometimes they do), but because the phrases become that much more descriptive.

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Since last week when I caught up on two weeks worth, the prompts have been:

  • mangy Calico cat
  • the sexy tango
  • stale pepperoni pizza
  • frayed power cord
  • warm amber eyes

Now, in my mind, this is one of those times where the five phrases essentially write the story. Since I've been taking each prompt and using them in the order given, this group would easily look like this:

I was hallucinating. I knew I was. Why else would I see a mangy Calico cat doing the sexy tango with a stale pepperoni pizza twirling on one paw and a frayed power cord clutched in the other, all the while, beckoning me with warm amber eyes? That's not normal, right?

It's not often that each prompt fits together so well in a paragraph, but this one does. I could stop there, too, but a drug induced hallucination seems a little too easy. Maybe I could try something a little hardboiled:

The dame was trouble, like a mangy Calico cat—from a distance, beautiful, charming, nice. A girl you could really dance the sexy tango with. Up close, though, she was more like stale pepperoni pizza—a looker, but tasteless—or a frayed power cord—you might get lucky and she'd be happy for a long time, or she might just up and—ZAP!—electrocute you. Accidentally, of course.

I knew all of this. The problem was, those blasted warm amber eyes. They messed with your head.

Or it could be a part of a thriller perhaps, where the protagonist is maybe in an alley, trying to hide and this scene plays out in front of them:

The trash bin wasn't much cover, but Garrick was nearly positive he had lost the men who were following him. What did they want? What had he done? He couldn't think of a single reason why anyone would want to kidnap him or harm him in anyway. He was a nobody. He dressed like one. His looks did not scream, "Big ransom!"

As his heartbeat slowed along with his breathing, Garrick made note of his immediate surroundings. He nearly started when he caught a slight movement out of the corner of his eye. It was a tail, flicking back and forth, belonging to a malnourished and mangy Calico cat. It wasn't looking at him, though, but across the alley at a horde of rats performing acrobatic feats that were at once gruesome and alluring.

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For a moment, Garrick couldn't tell what was causing the strange, almost choreographed frenzy. The sight caused a flash of memory, something Armen had said about a time he had watched rats chewing on something in a similar fashion, and scrambling over each other in a six inch mound to do it. What had he called it? The sexy tango? The thought made Garrick want to vomit. This was the farthest thing from sexy he had ever seen.

And yet, there was the feline watching the mass of moving fur, and so was he, despite possibly being in mortal danger. He was about to look away when he saw the object of the rodents' affection—a very stale pepperoni pizza. It was almost gone.

A frayed power cord, hanging from a rusted air conditioner abandoned nearby, had been caught up in the middle of the feast, and nearly chewed through.

Meanwhile, the cat just watched with moist, warm amber eyes. Maybe it was too sickly and starving to move. Just its tail. Flick. Flick. Flick.

Okay. I think that more or less gives you an idea of what my mind does with some pretty descriptive prompts. The cool thing about it, there's a number of ways the prompts could take the story and I think that's what I like most about participating in the freewrite. Let the words guide, if not virtually freewrite themselves.

Images source—Pixabay

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Thanks for looking and finding this post. I very much appreciate it. Seems like more and more this kind of formal curation is becoming a thing. The more the merrier. :)

Those were all pretty cool, I think I liked the frayed electrical cord !ZAP, one the best though.

Hey, @bashadow.

It's tough to go wrong with hardboiled detective stories. I think they'd be outdated for a lot of people though, since there would be a lot more terms from the thirties and forties than I used, but hey, they're fun to write. :)

Howdy sir Glen! That's a great shot of the cat, I just saw that it was pixabay, I was gonna compliment you on our beautiful cat. lol.
Hey did you get your license taken care of or did you find your old one?
And why is the price of steem going down?

Hey, @janton.

That was the closest I could come to a "mangy" looking calico. :)

I did. Yesterday. Waited for about twenty minutes right as the door opened because some lady with an obscure problem and nothing else to do on a Monday morning managed to be the first in line. Fortunately, my part went quickly, and they were able to issue me a temporary one until the real one comes in the mail. Supposed to be some time next week.

re: price

Well, the general crypto market has been taking a beating after Bitcoin took off. Unfortunately, not much of anything else went with it, and now, for some reason, everything's being sold off along with Bitcoin. I don't know why, but these things generally are a signal of one of two things—something is happening that makes crypto an unfavorable investment (could be more regulations, some kind of government crackdown somewhere or fear, uncertainty and doubt). I was kind of hoping $0.25 USD would be our holding point, but STEEM slammed right through it.

The other thing is, the sell off could be gearing up for the big, big money to show, and in order to do that, some big stakeholders are trying to make it more attractive.

In other words, who knows? There is bound to be some kind of rhyme or reason to this, but it only makes sense to those who have the billions if not the trillions to move markets like this.

Howdy sir Glen! How is work going this week? You are totally on your own now right?

After I asked that question about price I went to jrcornel to see if he had an answer because he's a crypto guy and he did and you're right, government involvement:

https://steemit.com/bitcoin/@jrcornel/the-crypto-market-is-getting-thrashed-here-s-why

I just wrote about the last couple of work days—probably easier to read it. In a nutshell, things are going better this week so far, with some rearranging of my schedule continuing. And yes, this is my third week where I've been running around on my own.

Have you been back out by that pizza place? That's the important question.lol.

Yes, I did, and there's a future Food Fight Friday post for it, since I didn't cook on Saturday. :)

oh, very good sir Glen! lol.

I always find it intriguing how the stories differ from different people using the same prompt... but you came up with so many. :D I think my favourite is the short-lived hallucination!

Hey, @kaelci.

That one just kind of flows out. Not too much to do with it, and sometimes, those are the best. :)

re: intriguing

I think it definitely has to do with life experience, along with the way we think and process things. I tend towards fiction almost instantly, but I see that others are more apt to write about a personal experience or expound on the world prompt as a topic somehow. It is very interesting. :)

Oh definitely. :) I love it when these things just flow. And yes! We bring what we know, and sometimes what we didn't know we knew, and it all comes out in some manner or other as we share our stories - whether they are fictional tales of goblins and mayhem or non-fictional accounts of a beloved cat long gone. I'm more of a fiction person too. :)

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